The View from Outside – part 2

It’s a 100 word challenge with a difference this week. You write the first 50 words of a story and, then choose someone else’s beginning and write 50 words to end their story. This is an ending, so before you read this, you need to read Taochild’s story to see how it started. To see what everyone else is up to and for a great read, head over to Julia’s Place.

He crash landed on what appeared to be a roof and tumbled feet first down a “chimney”.
Are you a burglar?” asked three year old Jake, sucking his thumb.
“No, I’m an alien,” was a sure way to cause alarm. What to say??? “I’m….delivering presents?”
And so the myth began.

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7 Responses to The View from Outside – part 2

  1. Just excellent. I cannot express how clever I think this one is – you win S-J!

  2. Oh this is very clever…am so impressed you have done so many and so well too. Am too full of festive food etc to do just at the mo :S

  3. jfb57 says:

    Oh how brilliant! To turn it from sci-fi to a fairy stroy (well sort of!). You are such a clever lady with such an imagination! So glad you are one of the 100WCGU folk!

  4. snagglewordz says:

    Hohohoho! This is one of my favourite endings. 😀

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